My neighbor, Rita, was a strange cheapskate. She would mow her lawn in the middle of the night with a halogen spot-light on her helmet. When she raised money for Unicef, she blew it all on a new sofa made of recycled popcorn. It squeaked. She still has it and I won’t sit there. Once she lied about sponsoring one of those kids in Africa, you know, the Sally Struthers commercials. I wouldn’t normally care, but I know it’s not true.
Last Friday, Becky Cardoza hosted a pot-luck party, which I thought was super. Kick off the summer, send the kids bowling or something. I arrived early, brought a dime bag and an outrageous bong shaped like a penis. Becky and I caught a buzz in her gardening shed while her husband, Stu, dropped the kids at the movies. We giggled about Rita’s latest: she’d become an Mary Kay rep. You wouldn’t catch us wearing that crap.
Lots of folks brought classy stuff. The Smithsons arrived with steamed clams. And Herb, our golf pro at Whispering Winds, raffled free lessons. I liked flirting with him, well, until he’d had more than one beer. Then he got a little too touchy-feely. Rita found the entire pot-luck idea insulting. So she arrived with a plastic party tray: one dozen perfectly carved melon balls.
I love Rita…. and I’d have one of her perfect melon balls…
I do not love Rita…I would not have one of her melon balls. I do like the story…by the way…word press can’t get it together.
I love Rita…but I would not have one of her melon balls. I just can’t stand any kind of melon. Ugh! It’s a testament to your writing, Robert, that we all have such strong feelings about Rita, either way. Wonderful little tome!
Fantastic details and wonderful romp through this fictional story. Robert is a master of invention!
I like the quirky characters and feel as if I might have grown up in this neighborhood. I know someone like Rita
I love this because it makes me smile and not much makes me smile these days. Thank you.
Great story, Robert, thanks for sending me the link. I enjoyed all of the material in this In Between Altered States (and a great title also!)